Remember

He stared at the photograph. The colours were already starting to fade and the corners had been folded by accident when it had slipped behind the desk.

He remembered the spot exactly. It had been his favourite place as a child. Sitting on the rocks, listening to the wind rustle through the leaves of the trees and the water flowing somewhere in the distance down the slope. It had been a tranquil place, where he had always been at peace.

After a while he had stopped going to the place. He had started socializing more, had a girlfriend. He had almost forgotten all about the place, until their one-year anniversary as a couple.

She wanted to go somewhere romantic, so in the spur of the moment, he had packed a picnic basket and taken her to his special place.

Looking back, he couldn’t quite piece together what had happened. It had all been wrong.

Trying to reconnect his new self with his past had ended in a disaster. Somehow, in a rage of sudden aggression, he channelled his anger towards her. Then she stumbled backwards.

As though in slow motion, he could still see her tumble backwards over the stones, hitting her head hard and her body bouncing down the slope of the hill until it came to a rest.

Snapping out of his dream, he ripped the photograph into tiny pieces. He couldn’t let the memories rip apart his carefully constructed perfect life.

© 2017

FFfAW, Week of June 6, 2017

Photo prompt provided by Pamela S. Canepa

Responses

  1. Wow. Great writing. Suspenseful.
    The Mine
    Annie at ~McGuffy’s Reader~

  2. Wonderful story! I was happy to find out at the end it was just a dream. I loved how you had him tear up the photo after having such a horrible dream. Welcome to the FFfAW challenge! We are happy you have joined us!

    1. Actually, it was a memory not a dream… So he did actually kill her… Sorry for the confusion. I’m glad you liked it though! And thank you – I’m happy to join too 🙂

  3. Perhaps it would be fitting if she would haunt him.

    1. He’d deserve that.

  4. great writing

  5. An interesting take on this. Something tells me, this memory isn’t done with him, yet.

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